Wednesday, October 14, 2009

Rainbow Lenses

You need me, reconsider you say
oh restlessly the wind blows
when your faced with eternity

Give time her due, she passes
in nursery rhymes
in troubled times

she passes away


I remember that day,
the day we first kissed

Fire fell from the sky
and I viewed it from a distance
through rainbow lenses

Don't know where those lenses are now


  1. There is such a delicate although direct sense of loss here. Nicely written, Strawberry Girl, nice indeed. I hope all is well for you and yours.

  2. I love the phrase "rainbow lenses". You will find them lenses again. It is just a matter of time. I hope and know all will be well soon!

  3. Thank you Judith I hope to find all well for you and yours as well.

    Ajey, thank you. I'm sure things will get better soon, it is only a matter of time.

  4. Very powerful, every line packs a punch. Incredible poetry.

  5. use of rainbow lenses was good in a weird way!!yup takes a lot of time to move on but then also some of the memories still remain with us.tracing our footsteps again to find a piece that once connected with that memory!!i think you will someday find your rainbow lenses!!keep writing!!

  6. Thank you Tira.

    Heavealie, thanks for stopping by and commenting.