This shall "prick" anyone. The lines although blunt are sharp. Forgiveness should come as quick as possible. Hang on! Keep writing!!!
Deeply felt - Strawberry Girl. There is questionable love here.
wow this is deep the word faggots very strong here.. Heal dear ONEHUGS
Hello SG, it is SO GOOD to see you back on the blog. I have sorely missed reading your poetry, and my thoughts were with your well-being. I hope things are looking up for you. Your poetry does not seem particularly joyful at the moment, but I continue to hope. :)
I am liking the strong emotion that your words convey.The short lines equally so, makes for a stronger read.
Oh, yes - I feel your pain and anger...
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Thanks all, sorry I've not been updating. I'm in a time of suspense it seems. I will get back to updating when my computer is fixed... :)
"Fagots eat at my heart"-and so the world wonders how the poets come up with such lines!!my friend always tells me that how do poets come up with such line!!reading this line i wonder why even though i myself write!!forgiveness never comes easily craving you each and every second!!jostling with your emotions and thoughts!!the whole emotion was blunt and described straight from the heart!!well written and keep writing!!
Heavealie, I am not sure where those types of lines come from as well. It just came out that way, it was an expression of an intense feeling. Thanks for the comment. :)